donderdag 29 september 2011

The movie

Hello, This is the first time that I write in this blog. I'm going tell something about the first ten minutes of the movie. The protagonists of de movie is Bridget Jones, her boyfriend is Mark Darcy. Bridget works for the TV. This time she has to jump parachute for the TV.  She was afraid but still wait, because she was nervous, she forgot her parachute, but luckily she pulled him out in time. Unfortunately she came down in a piggery. All dirty she closed the TV-program. The next day she went back to her work. Later that day she calles her boyfriend Mark about their night. Mark had the phone on his speaker and he was busy in a meeting so she was very ashamed.


So this was the first time, I write a piece of the movie! Next time I write further about the movie !


The Movie:
Gepost door op

2 opmerkingen:

  1. filmreport3 oktober 2011 om 11:51

    - Leuk stukje. Nu nog in het Engels
    Cheers,
    Mr. T

    BeantwoordenVerwijderen
  2. filmreport30 oktober 2011 om 14:26

    - in this blogg (choice of words)
    - I'm gonna (grammar)
    - I'm gonna tell anything (grammar/something)
    - about the movie. (choice of w/ of the movie)
    - her boyfriend Mark Darcy van de film is Bridget Jones.(weird sentence)
    - she had to jump parachute (choice of w)
    - but still wait, because she was nerveus, she forgot her parachute, but luckily she pullud him out in time. (grammar/spelling/ sentence too long)
    - Unfortunately she wasn't down where she had come down, she come down in a piggery, all dirty she closed the TV-program. (sentence too long)
    - The day forward (choice of w)
    - but she lost her work. (story line)
    - on the speaker (choice of w)
    - she was ashamesd death (choice of w)

    BeantwoordenVerwijderen

Abonneren op: Reacties posten (Atom)